
Joanne Durham’s On Shifting Shoals (Kelsay Books, 2023) is a snapshot of Durham’s world. Her poems illustrate enticing and perfectly composed scenes of nature and family. While nature and family do not exist perfectly in the real world, Durham’s expertly woven images reel the audience into a utopia full of quiet humor and glorified ordinariness. On Shifting Shoals leaves the reader with an irresistible desire to elope their own life in the hope of finding a paradise as brilliant as the one in Durham’s mind. Gross annoyances of reality interrupt sparingly, driving us back to reality when life starts to seem a little too perfect. The ocean backdrops every moment of conflict and harmony, leaving readers at Durham’s mercy as we enjoy the soft crashes of waves, floating peacefully with the dolphins and waiting for the inevitable moment Durham disturbs the peace.
Durham’s vivid details do not take away from the larger metaphors and themes found in the collection. In fact, Durham’s description of the ocean makes it difficult to shake the image of a self-transformation through cleansing. In “Equanimity,” Durham says:
But I slam many doors
when my worries become unhinged. Then I slide
open the screen door and walk out to the ocean.
It urges me to listen
between roar and purr. (37)
Here, Durham uses the environment to tie in the speaker’s self-possession and metamorphosis. She reveals her own intimate relationship with the environment that surrounds her, reeling in readers, and adding depth to the narrative with occasional snippets of the chaos in the speaker’s inner world. The raw account of these experiences renders itself trustworthy making it easy for readers to let go of their inhibition and dive wholeheartedly into self-reflection.
On Shifting Shoals is a meditation on the everyday marvels and miracles that surround us, and the thoughtlessness in which humans often conduct themselves in contemporary, capitalist society. Durham makes the old-fashioned habit of simply living and observing look healing. She renews the freshness to doing nothing, a pastime that almost always leads to doing something, whether it is watching orange butterflies and orange blossoms “match the way lovers match” (16), or “gawking at the crimson egg that hovers on horizon’s edge” (38), Durham’s beautiful descriptions of slow-living hold us in a trance.
Beauty comes in different forms and Durham’s lovely world is not without its quips and oddballs. In “Garbage,” Durham describes the response the speaker gives a neighbor whose loud complaints regarding someone digging through trash endangering his children have made it around the neighborhood:
Go to school, my dear ones,
learn to salvage
the bounty that belongs
to us all. Scrounge
through rubbish to find it,
don’t be shooed away
like a swarming fly.
It’s your world to retrieve. (33)
“Garbage” is the antidote we all need. It is the reality-checker, the truth thrown in our face so suddenly it breaks our focus on Durham’s world. At no point does Durham attempt to persuade the reader into believing that her world is a utopia, and yet we cannot help but think of it as one. It’s easy to fall into thinking that the charm of Durham’s world only exists in fantasies—whether this is a precondition of living in our capitalist society where there is no room for quiet observation, or some other reason, we cannot say. In one swift move, Durham drags us back down to earth. She reminds the reader that finding your own peace and beauty in life is your own duty—that there is still much to wonder about in the world, and it will be a lifelong struggle.
On Shifting Shoals is an unexpected mirror forcing us to look at ourselves and the world behind us. Our soul-sucking routines that demand us to continue pushing forward are a far cry from Durham’s celebrations of life with all its terrifying complexities and dark confusions. The normality of Durham’s joy is striking and fresh. Her poetic voice is witty, bold, and clever. We are thrown into the deep end and made to swim through intimate relationships with subjects the speaker already knows well. Durham commands our attention, teasing and alluring, at times directly speaking to the reader as though we are an old friend. “I knew you’d understand!” says Durham (30). It’s more difficult to pretend we don’t understand than it is to simply get it. Durham writes so confidently and convincingly, we wonder if we have ever lived outside her world.
On Shifting Shoals is available for purchase at Kelsay Books
Hedaya Hasan is a Palestinian writer and designer based in Chicago.












